she eyes me at the bar, she fondels her raven mane,
the glint in her eye, drives me insanely insane;
her dusky skin & her uber seductive stance,
her sultry legs deserve another glance;
the trance, tequila & vinegar highs,
in this moment-our destiny lies;
moves i make, behind hers,
reciprocating wonders;
it's a blinding night,
succulent delight;
what beauty?,
dark,sooty;
ephemeral
impulsive
luscious
hedonist
sensuous
engaging
adorable
magnetic
attractive
in this surreal moment of truth i find my feet
alas! here's where i end my alcoholic retreat.
must be quite a chica, this..
ReplyDeleteshe sweeps you off your feet..
can her, we meet? the subject of your alcoolic retreat?
real nice stuff...
Cheers \m/, (+.+) ,\m/
ane...this was awesome!!
ReplyDeleteRead it again today...after such a long time...
ReplyDeleteI first read it in S.F. i guess...
Sirjee you are a genius
P.S. since u have started posting on facebook so often...repost this one over there...its a brilliant take and should be read by all your fans and friends who have missed it...
ReplyDeleteI was tempted to come and read your comparative moment ..eavesdropped on your note to Sarang at Klash and boy is this an eclectic mix or what? Insanely insane ! I am a sucker for intelligent eccentricity. As is the case, takes one nut to recognise another.
ReplyDeleteLoved this to the core :-)
Jenny